This is my first draft of my public space analysis. I am still trying to figure out the organization of my piece because right now I feel like it is comparison and contrast essay when I want it to be an analysis.
I would like some help trying to organize my ideas better in relation to public space. Also, I don't know if I should be saying "I" and things of that nature when I describe the space. Do I make it seem like I am comparing these two schools? Because my goal is to analyze/argye how their shared space effects both schools in different ways.
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